Since the crit. session about 2 weeks ago, myself & Shazna have made all the changes that were needed to be made on our film opening. The conversation scene has been edited out which has improved our opening a lot. Since watching it back without this particular scene, I've really realised how much it wasn't needed and how much it ruined the rest of our opening. Another point that people brought up was the typography of the names that come up throughout the sequence. We've edited these out, and now have the names of myself, Shazna and Lucy coming up on a black background and written in white in order to make them stand out. We also decided to no longer have the titles on our actual opening images as during the crit. session I realised that they took the attention off of the actual scene, and just ruined the atmosphere that we were trying to create.
Another issue with our film opening that was raised in the crit. session was the title of our film. It was originally 'He's Coming After You', but after the responses about it from people we decided to change this to something more original. I thought it would be a good idea to have something like 'murder', 'stalker' or 'following' in Latin. We looked up the translation of all these words last week, and decided that one of the translations for murder was the best choice. So now, our film is called 'Cruoris'! Now that all of our editing has been completed we're both happy with the results, so now all thats left to do is the evaluation due in for this Friday!
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